The Correcting Of Errors In Students Work English Language Essay

The Correcting Of Errors In Students Work English Language Essay Look at the following pieces of written work. In each case write a list of all the errors that have been made. Mark on the list, which type of error they are, according to the simple classification above. Write the correct version of the error underneath eg: Student 1 I am 46 years old and married (G) for twenty years. We have got three children, one soon (SP) and two daughters. There (G) are six, eight and eleven years old. I am an electrical engineer and worked (T) for a company who manufactured (T)machines for processing automatically.(WO) At first, I am going to learn English in Great Britain. Its very important for my job. Then, I would like to have a little compangniy (SP) with about ten co-worker (WW) for myself. If it (G) isnt possible, Ill (G) manage a department who developed (G T) high technology machines. I became (WO)the test sheets for complete (WO) and (G)return directly at you. You phoned at your agent about my course at your school in Bristol. Very thanks for your trouble. (WO) Im happy to come at (PR)your school and Im (G) sure to learn better English. (G) I dont know my flight number on the 5st (SP) March. I would (G) let you (MW) as soon as possible. 1. I am 46 years old and married (G) for twenty years.   C- I am 46 years old and have been married for twenty years. 2. We have got three children, one soon (SP) and two daughters. C- We have got three children, one son two daughters. 3.There (G) are six, eight eleven years old. C- They are six, eight eleven years old. 4. I am an electrical engineer and worked (T) for a company who manufactured machines for processing automatically (T). C- I am an electrical engineer and work for a company who manufactures automatic processing machines. 5. Then, I would like to have a little compagniy (SP) with about ten co-worker (WW)for myself. C- Then, I would like to have a little company with about ten employees 6. If it (G) isnt possible, Ill manage a department who (G) developed (T) high technology machines. C- If that isnt possible, Ill like to manage a department  that  develops high technology machine. 7. I became (WW) the test sheets for complete (WW) and (G)return directly at (PR)you. C- I have the test sheets for completion and I will return directly to you. 8. You phoned at your agent about my course at your school in bristol. C-   The error may be context and grammar    9. Very thanks for your trouble. (WO) C- Many thanks for your trouble 10. Im happy to come at (PR)your school and Im sure to (G) learn better English. (WW) C- Im happy to come to your school and Im sure I will improve my English. 11. I dont know my flight number on the 5st March (G). C- I dont know  my flight number on the 5th of March. 12. I would (G)let you ^as soon as possible. C- I will let you know as soon as possible. Student 2 I am fourty (SP) years old. My height is 1.8m (G) and my hair is blond. My hobbys (SP)are walking and climbing (sp) in the mountain (G). My job (G) is Quality-Manager. I live (T) ten years at (PR) Russikon. I weake (SP) up at seven ochlock (SP) in the morning. I go (G) for breakfast in the kitchen. After the breakfast and I drive to work by car. In the office there is a lot of work. I have a brak at ten oclock and I drink a tea. 12 oclock I go home for lunch. In the future I will a good life with my family. I hope I get a lot of money. I will learn better English for my job. I hope you will be happy with my history. 1.  Im fourty years old. C- Im forty (SP)  years old. 2. My height is 1.8m (G) and my hair is blond. C- I am 1.8m tall and my hair is blond. 3. My hobbys (SP)are walking and clymbimgin (SP)the mountain (G). C- My hobbies are walking and climbing in the mountains. 4. My job is quality-manager. (G) C-I am a quality- manager 5.  I live ten years at Russikon. (G/WO) C- I have lived 10 years in Russikon 6. I weake (SP) up at seven ochlock (SP) in the morning. C- I wake up seven oclock in the morning. 7. I go for breakfast in the kitchen. (G) C- I have my breakfast in the kitchen 8. After the breakfast (G) and I drive to work by car. C-After breakfast, I drive to work by car. 9. In the office there is a lot of work. (WO) C- There is lot of work in the office 10. I have a break at ten oclock and I drink a tea. C- I have a break at ten oclock and I have a cup of tea 11. In the future I will (G) a good life with my family. C-In the future I hope to have good life with my family. 12. I hope I get a lot (G,WO) of money. C- I hope I will  make lot of money. 13. I will learn better (G) english (SP) for my job. C-I hope to improve my English as I need it for my job. 14. I hope  you will be happy with my history. (WW) C-I hope you will be happy with my story. Student 3. Yesterday I arrived in Bath. In this town there is a college where Ill study English for two weeks. When we arrived at the college we went to our bedroom. I stay in bed-room with my best friend and Im very happy for this. At eight oclock we had dinner and then we have visited the college. It is beautiful and there is also a swimming pool. Then we caome back to our bed-room wher Ive chatted whit my friend for a long time. We both happy and we both hope to have good time in this college. Unfortunately the weather isnt very good yesterday rained and today too but I think that the weather isnt very important. 1. Yesterday I arrived in Bath. (WO) C- I arrived in Bath yesterday. 2. In this town there is a college (WO)where Ill study English for two weeks. C   There is a college in this town where Ill study English for two weeks. 3. When we arrived at the college we went to our bedroom. (G) C- When we arrived at the college, we went to our bedrooms. 4. I stay in bed-room with my best friend and Iam very happy for this. (G, WO) C-I am very happy that I am sharing the room with my best friend. 5. At eight oclock we had dinner and then we have (G) visited the college. C- At eighth oclock we had dinner then we visited the college. 6. Then we caome (SP) back to our bed-room wher (G) Ive chatted (G) whit (SP) my friend for a long time. C-Then we came (SP) back to our bedroom where I chat with my friend for a long time. (G) 6. We both happy (G) and we both hope to have a good time in this (PR) college. C- We are both happy and we both hope to have a good time at this college. 7. Unfortunately the weather isnt (G)very good yesterday rained and today too. (WO) C- Unfortunately the weather wasnt very good; it rained  yesterday again today.   8. But I think that the weather isnt very (G) important. C- I dont think the weather is very important. Student 4 1.I had been (G) in London for about four days, (conjunction) I saw the Tower  of London, the Tower bridge the Big Ben and the other famous places of this city (G, WO). C- I have been (G) in London for about four days, and I saw the Tower of London, Tower Bridge, Big Ben and some of the citys other famous places.   2. To arrive in Bath, I brought a coach. (WO) C- I came to  Bath by coach. 3. The journey was long (WO) but Im very happy to arrive (G) in this town. C- It was a long journey but Im very happy to have arrived in this town. 4.. I didnt stay (G)here before, but all my friends who saw (G) Bath tell me that it is very beautiful. C- I have never been here before, but all my friends who have visited Bath tell me it is very beautiful 5. I hope I (G) enjoy myself very much. C- I hope I  will enjoy myself very much. Student 5. Collection of error, not a narrative. a) Thank you for the informations. (G) C- Thank you for the information b) I stand up at 6 oclock in the morning. (WW) C- I wake up at 6 oclock in the morning. c) When I am ready I am eating my meal. (T) C- When I am ready I will eat my meal. d) I passed a good week with you. (WW) C- I spent a good week with you. e) I want saying you thank you. (G) C- I want to say thank you. f) I had ^(G) very nice lunch and ^(G) wine and it made me very full up (WO) and Im no more hungry. C- I had a very nice lunch and a glass of wine, and it made me very full and I am not hungry anymore g) Where I stay (G) the wife is a very good cooker (WO). C- Where I am staying, the wife is a very good cook. h) The father is very humouristic. (WW) C- The landlord is very humoristic. i) Im deceived (WW) for answer as ^ quickly. C- I am unable to answer quickly. j) My friend dont let me any place. C Convoluted, with multiple meanings. k) The weather gets warmer in summer isnt it (P, G)? C- The weather gets warmer in summer doesnt it? i) My partner gives the answer dont he? (WO)    C- He has the answer doesnt he? m) The weather will remember me England. (WO) C- The weather reminds me of England. n) We put there our luggage. (WO) C- We put  our  luggage there. o) On five oclock I want to eat my tea. (P, WO) C-  I want to eat my  tea at five oclock.   Grammar Present Perfect vs Past Simple Exercise 1 (Ive been or I was?) Complete this letter to a newspaper. Put in the Present Perfect or Past Simple. This pub __________ (be) the centre of village life for centuries. It _________(stand) at our crossroads for 500 years. It ___________(be) famous in the old days, and Shakespeare once ____________(stay) there, they say. I __________(live) in Brickfield all my life. The villagers ___________(know) about the plans for less than a week and already theres a Save Our Pub campaign. Last week we _______________(be) happy, but this week were angry. We will stop them, youll see. Reason why the exercise is good: This exercise is useful as it gives students are given a context to fill in the blanks with the right language use Exercise 2 Present perfect or past simple? Put in the verbs. Tom: Have you heard (you/hear) the news about David? Harriet: No. (1) __________________(what/happen)? Tom: (2) ____________(he/have) an accident. He was walking down some steps. (3) _________(he/fall) and ____________(break) his leg. Reason why this exercise is good: It makes a realistic exercise for students to practice the language use in speaking. Relative clauses (who,that, which) Join the following sentences to make one sentence using a relative pronoun when necessary. If the relative pronoun is unnecessary, put it in brackets. You may sometimes have to change the word order or change a into the. Theres the boy. He broke the window. _______________________________ The film star gave a party. It cost $10,000. _______________________________ Thats the palace. The Queen lives in it. _______________________________ You met a man at the party. He is a famous film star. The man_______________________________ My friend came to the party. Hes a policeman. _______________________________ There are the policemen. They caught the thief. _______________________________ Whats the name of the lady? She was wearing the blue dress. _______________________________ I gave her a watch. It stopped after two days. _______________________________ My car was very expensive. Its a Mercedes. _______________________________ Youre reading a book. I wanted to read it. _______________________________ Reason why this exercise is good: Students get to practice language use in writing as they combine 2 sentences together, and also forming the sentence in the correct subject verb order with the correct relative clause. Relative clauses Put a relative pronoun into each gap. At the same time, decide whether the relative pronoun can be omitted. 1 The books, _______________ Id ordered over the internet, took nearly three weeks to arrive. 2 The books _______________ Id ordered from a bookshop arrived the following week. 3 My parents, _______________ were born in the north of England, moved to London to find work. 4 The man _______________ lives upstairs is always playing music when Im trying to get to sleep. 5 The building _______________ I live in was built in the 1920s. 6 The building _______________ I live was built in the 1920s. 7 The cars making a funny noise again, _______________ means well have to get someone to look at it. 8 The employee to _______________ you refer is no longer working for this company. 9 Do you remember the name of the man _______________ car you crashed into? 10 Have you any idea _______________ they were arguing about? 11 Have you any idea _______________ they were arguing? 12 The hotel _______________ we stayed was very good for the price. Fill in the gaps in the following sentences by using either what or which. (When which is used it should be preceded by a comma which the student must insert for himself). 1.- He didnt believed ____ I said ____ annoyed me very Married man (to bachelor friend): You can do ________ like much. in the evenings but I have to go home to my wife. 2.- In detective stories the murderer is always caught ____ 20.- ________ my neighbour is cooking there is a smell of doesnt happen in real life. burning. 3.- He wasnt surprised at ____ he saw because I told him ____ to expect. 4.- In hospitals they wake patients at 6 a.m. ____ is much too early. 5.- There was no directory in the first telephone box ____ meant I had to go to another one. 6.- I did ____ I could ____ wasnt much. 7.- The clock struck thirteen ____ made everyone laugh. 8.- I am sure that ____ you say is true. Will/going to exercise Explanation: will-future or going to-future Bottom of Form 1) Philipp __________15 next Wednesday. (to be) 2) They ___________a new computer. (to get) 3) I think, my mother ______________this CD. (to like) 4) Pauls sister _____________a baby. (to have) 5) They_____________ at about 4 in the afternoon. (to arrive) 6) Just a moment. I _______ you with the bags. (to help) 7) In 2020 people ___________ more hybrid cars. (to buy) 8) Marvin __________ a party next week. (to throw) 9) We _____________ to Venice in June. (to fly) 10) Look at the clouds! It ________________soon. (to rain) Question Tags exercise You are at a barbecue. Add question tags to help start a friendly conversation. These sausages are delicious, ___________________? They certainly are. You havent lived here long ________________? No, only three months. Its quite a big garden _____________? Yes, theres plenty of room. Youre Rachels friend _____________? Yes, Im Vicky You came in a sports car, ____________? Thats right. These burgers look good ____________? I cant wait to try them. We can sit on the grass ____________? I think its dry enough. The weather forecast wasnt very good, ____________? No, it wasnt. The exercise guides students to fill in the right question tag by giving both the question and answer. Exercise 2 Requests and questions. You want to look at a newspaper. Daniel might have one, so ask him (havent) Warn David not to do anything silly. (Dont) Suggest to Vicky that you both listen to some music. (Lets) You need a timetable. Emma might have one, so ask her. (havent) Ask Rachel to pass you the salt. (Pass) This exercise is good as students will have to reconstruct the question and answer. Present Simple/ Present continuous Simple Present or Present Progressive/Continuous Exercise 2 Explanation: Simple Present or Present Progressive Top of Form Fill in the verbs in brackets in the Simple Present or the Present Progressive. Example: Steve always ____ his bike in the afternoon. (to ride) Answer: Steve always rides his bike in the afternoon. 1) Andy sometimes _______ comics. (to read) 2) We never ________ TV in the morning. (to watch) 3) Listen! Sandy ________ in the bathroom. (to sing) 4) My sister usually ________ in the kitchen. (to help) 5) My mother ________ breakfast now. (to make) 6) They often ________ the bathroom. (to clean) 7) Look! The boys ________ home. (to come) 8) Every day his grandfather ________ for a walk. (to go) 9) I ________ with my friend at the moment. (to chat) 10) Cats ________ mice. (to eat) Bottom of Form http://www.englisch-hilfen.de/en/exercises/tenses/simple_present_progressive2.htm Exercise 2 Im writing to my parents. I write to them every weekend. _________________(it/snow) outside. ______________(it/come) down quite hard, look. I havent got a car at the moment, so ______________(I/go) to work on the bus this week. Usually _________________(I/drive) to work. Normally _______________(I/start) work at eight oclock, but ___________ (I/start) at seven this week. Were very busy at the moment. Im afraid I have no time to help just now. ______________ (I/write) a report. But _____________ (I/promise) Ill give you some help later. ______________ (I/want) a new car. _______________ (I/save) up to buy one. Verbs followed by prepositions Fill in the blanks with the correct prepositions. 1 She suffers _______ diabetes. _________________________________ 2 She complained _______ the food to the manager. _________________________________ 3 I often listen ________ the radio while driving. _________________________________ 4 He got married ______ a girl he met in China. _________________________________ 5 She has applied ______ a new job. _________________________________ 6 He spends a lot of time ______ his work. _________________________________ 7 Who are you shouting ________ ? _________________________________ 8 Who does this book belong ______ ? _________________________________ 9 They are going to translate the book _______ Chinese. _________________________________ 10 She apologised ____ being late. _________________________________ 11 Her teachers were satisfied ______ her progress. _________________________________ 12 Im thinking _______ going to France. Verb and Prepositions For each of the six questions choose the one correct answer: 1. Youve been talking about asking her out for weeks, what are you waiting ____? a. to b. in c. at d. for 2. Yeah, Mr Bennett is our history teacher, hes nice but I never know what hes talking _______. a. of b. on c. about d. over 3. Ive finally decided to call ______ Simon, I want to know how he feels. a. b. to c. at d. in 4. People say he works _____ the CIA, and he carries a gun! a. at b. for c. with d. in 5. What kind of music do you like listening ____? a. to b. at c. d. for 6. What did you discuss _____ at the meeting? a. on b. over c. about d. Adverbial modifier of Place 1 Underline the adverbial modifier in the sentences. The arrow fell on this spot You can buy it in all places. He fell to the ground. He studied in a foreign country. I found the book at that corner. Underline the adverbial modifier in the sentences. The shoe is pressing on my toe. The desert stretched to the north. Much water has run under the bridge. He was playing beside the river. He whispered gaily in her ear. These exercises draws students to the adverbial phrases used within the context of a sentence. Adverbial modifier of Time 1 Underline the adverbial modifier in the sentences. No such diseases were known in those days. He is coming at this very moment. Before very long, the rain came. In former times, we had to cycle to school. He came to the class just now. Adverbial modifier of Time 2 Underline the adverbial modifier in the sentences. He succeeded in the long run. Let us cease work from this very moment. He sat for a while on the bank of the river. The alarm sounded at the appointed time. I hope he will come at a very early date. General Tenses 1 Rewrite the sentences by correcting the tenses. I was eating breakfast right now. Usually I worked in an office, However , these days, I was working as a waitress. He woke up in the morning brush his teeth and ate lunch. I will not eat until I will be hungry. When I arrived, Steven has been playing football. Reason why this exercise is good: Giving students error correction exercises allows them to be less self-conscious of the mistakes they make, as well as gain an understanding of the different errors. Correct Answer: I am eating breakfast right now. Usually I worked in an office, However , these days, I am working as a waitress. He woke up in the morning, brushed his teeth and ate lunch. I will not eat until I am hungry. When I arrived, Steven was playing football. General Tenses 2 Choose the correct answer. 1. The train wasnt there. It __________ already had been left has left had left 2. How long __________________each other when they got married? have they known had they known would they know 3. She ________________ to speak English before she arrived in London. had learned already will have already learned had already learned 4. Rick ______________ good Mandarin because he had been studying for several years. spoke had spoken has spoken 5. I _____________ from him for ten years when I received his last letter. didnt hear hadnt been hearning hadnt heard It is, it was, it will be 1 Answer the questions using the above words. You may add your own details. 1. In which year did Mary start schooling? 2. What sport does John play in school? 3. Where did the Olympic Games originate? 4. When can you finished the project? When is the sun nearer to the earth, at noon or at sunset? These questions give students free reign to practice their language use. It is, it was, it will be 2 Answer the questions using the above words. You may add your own details. 1. When will Paul graduate? 2. Do you know who has taken the pencil? 3. Is the snake longer than 1 metre? 4. Who has taken the pie yesterday? 5. Will the basket be weaved in a 3 days? Preposition of Place Fill in the blank with a suitable preposition. Being chased by the dog, he dashed _________ the road. He leaned __________ the wall as he waited for the bus. All the while the child has been standing __________ the curtain. The supporters stand _________ the politician as he was being charged. He kept very silent as he sat ___________ the boss. Answer: 1) across against behind by besides Preposition of Place Fill in the blank with a suitable preposition. He lost his way and came ______ the end of the road. The chest can be found ______ the surface of the cross junction. As he was brooding when walking he fell _______ a ditch. We have combed _______ the estate and could not find the dog. The workers marched _______ the town in protest. Answer to below into round through Preposition of Time Fill in the blank with a suitable preposition. We start ____ six _____ in the morning. _____ last month I have seen him but once. He was at the library _____ the whole day. Ten minutes _____ twelve, he was already there. The citizens prospered ______ the rule of the king Asnwer at , in from during to under Preposition of Time 2 Fill in the blank with the correct preposition. There was drought _______ the year. The students arrived well ______ the teacher. They completed the project ______ three o clock. You must finish the marking _______ a month The rain lasted ______ the night. Answer: throughout before by within through Preposition + Dates Fill in the blank with a suitable preposition. 1) I have been ill ___________ last week. 2) I commenced work ________ 1st January 3) Not ______ the next month can I submit the project. 4) I shall work ______ the end of May. 5) _______ week 1 and week 2, I will be on holiday. Answer since from until till Between Preposition + Dates 2 Fill in the blank with a suitable preposition. 1) You must complete the assignment _____ the 8th of June. 2) ________ April , you can go on leave. 3) They have worked _______ the month of January. 4) He goes _____ Sunday to the church. 5) He took off in lie _____ Monday holiday. Answer by after into on of Present Simple and Simple Future Complete the following by putting in the verbs. Use the present simple or future simple. Alice ___________ (walk) to school everyday. These books _________ twenty dollars each. (cost) I ________________ (call) you when I reach the office. The sun _____________ (rise) in the east. We ____________ (travel) to Japan during the summer holiday if we can get the air tickets. Answer walks cost will call rises will travel Present Simple and Simple Future Complete the following by putting in the verbs. Use the present simple or simple future. Badminton is a wonderful game. John ___________ (love) to play it. 2 The train usually ____________ (leave) at five-thirty every morning. 3. I ______________(send) you the information when I receive it. The phone is ringing. I _____________ (get) it. It always ____________ (rain) in the weekend. Answer loves leaves will send will get rains Reason consequence 1 Identify which is the reason and which is the consequence in the sentences. Janet was so fat that she refused to take part in sport. It was his greed that led to his downfall. If I go out in the rain I get wet. I will buy the house provided that it is cheap. He finished last as he began late. This exercise corrects the errors by showing what is wrong and getting students to arrange it in the right order. Reason consequence 2 Identify which is the reason and which is the consequence in the sentences. 1) In case he is seriously ill. I will email you. 2) Had you been less rash, we would not lose the game. 3) It is your unfortunate remark that the meeting becomes sour. 4) As you have made a promise, you must keep it. 5) He speaks too fast to be understood. Simple Present and Past Simple Present Simple and Past Simple to be Complete the sentences with am, is, was, or were. Where ____________ Paul today? Kenny ____________ in Japan last month. Joseph ____________ not present at the moment. ____________ the boys in school last week? Could he read when he ______________ one year old ? Rewrite the passage with the right form of the verb. I (go) to the cinema last night. What film (you-see) ? I (see) The Lord of The Rings . Really? (you-like) it? It (be) really fantastic. I

Westboro Baptist Church: A Deviant Hate Crime Group? Essay -- Hate Spe

Deviant behavior is anything that a person does that is out of the norm. Robbing banks, stealing cars, and assaulting individuals are easily considered deviant behavior, but can people be deviant while still being within their legal rights and without breaking any laws? One congregation that does not break any laws, but is considered to be out-of-line, is the Westboro Baptist Church. The Westboro Baptist Church has been called offensive and their actions are frowned upon by many. Is the Westboro Baptist Church actually a deviant group in disguise? In order to get to know about the Westboro Baptist Church, a person needs to know a little about who they are, where they came from, and what they represent. The Westboro Baptist Church was created in 1955 by a man named Fred Phelps, in Topeka Kansas, and is considered to follow old school Baptist beliefs (God, 2011). The Westboro membership numbers less than 100 who profess to all of the teachings of the Bible, and preach against every type of sin (God). Uncommonly, the church has no known affiliation to with any other Baptist churches (Parks, 2010). The Westboro members have been known to picket at least six events a day, such as: soldier's funerals, celebrity funerals, homosexual functions, etc. (Parks, 2010). Signage held by members at these events always include hateful expressions. â€Å"God hates fags† and â€Å"thank god for dead soldiers† are a few of the signs that people have seen at picketing events (God, 2011). Which is a reflection of their church web site entitled â€Å"god hates fags†. Members of the church use several several scriptures from the Bible that discuss homosexuality as sinful for justification of their practices and stance (God, 2011). Accordi... ... E. (2011). Deviant Behavior (9th Edition). Pearson Education Inc. pg 6 Gregory, S. (2010). The Price Of Free Speech. Time, 1(14), 30. Jonsson, P. (2011, March 3). What recourse now to Westboro Baptist Church's rude protests?. Christian Science Monitor. p. N. PAG. Krueger, A. B., & Maleckova, J. (2003). Education, Poverty and Terrorism: Is There a Causal Connection?. Journal of Economic Perspectives, 17(4), 119-44 2010. Parks Facts. Info Facts. Retrieved From: http://parksfacts.blogspot.com/2010/11/westboro-baptist-church.html Religious hate crimes down in 2007, says FBI. (2008). Christian Century, 125(24), 16. Richey, W. (2011, March 2). Supreme Court: 'hurtful speech' of Westboro Baptist Church is protected. Christian Science Monitor. p. N.PAG. (2011). Who are the Westboro Baptist Church and the Phelps Family? International Business Times.

An Effective Classroom Teacher Essay

I believe that with being a teacher comes great responsibility. A teacher will leave a lasting impression on their pupils, they should be free from any prejudice and treat children as individuals by respecting their backgrounds, religion, disability and race. I am extremely concerned about becoming an effective teacher and many factors contribute to this. This essay will highlight my areas of concern and how my initial thoughts have developed during my placement. My areas of concern include planning and executing enjoyable lessons. They also include the strategies I observed the teacher using to mange behaviour in the classroom which is essential for the smooth flow of the day. Confidence is a factor which I feel improves every time you teach, and if lessons are well planned and subject knowledge is secure a teacher would automatically begin to feel confident. I am also concerned about classroom organisation and the implementation of routines. I observed many examples of set routines which the school follow, this is the responsibility of the teacher to enforce and then keep consistent. These are all attributes or responsibilities of an effective teacher and this essay will explore them and discuss possible ways of improving or developing them. I have also included my experience regarding assessment and the importance of identifying strengths and weaknesses to become an effective teacher. Finally, I have included some experiences of my university education which has helped me to identify my areas for concern. I feel that being an effective teacher should involve valuing, gaining and giving respect to the children. I was concerned how this could be achieved. I saw fantastic examples on my school placement which I hope to adopt myself. Every morning the teacher would give the children time to settle on the carpet and instead of talking amongst each other, they would in turn talk to the teacher and the rest of the class, often about issues which were concerning them or something exciting that happened over the weekend. The teacher made sure every child had a chance to talk no matter how trivial. She showed genuine interest in them and never let them feel insignificant. I really admired the teacher for this. I initially thought it was just a nice way to start the morning however, after thinking about it so many strategies are involved and learning taking place. The children develop confidence in talking in front of the class; they are sharing their thoughts and feelings, and learning how to express themselves. The bond of trust is being formed between pupil and teacher. Finally, it is good strategy for managing behaviour. Children learn to listen to each other and they also learn patience and turn-taking. † The most effective teachers frequently involved the whole class in discussion and were skilled at doing this, which was not necessarily whole-class teaching as such.† (Dean, J. (2001) p.39)  Therefore I feel that it is extremely important to value a child despite race, gender, religion or disability. And to truly show an interest in them and respect their thoughts and beliefs. I feel that I established a good relationship with the children and they felt comfortable around me. This is where I felt I was effective in my teaching. All this contributes to being an effective teacher. Mortimore et al. (1988) found that effective teachers gave rewards rather than punishments, as punishments had a negative effect on learning. I observed a great deal of this on my school placement which I quickly adopted. Unwanted behaviour was often ignored until absolutely necessary, whereas good behaviour was praised quickly and an example made of it to the rest of the class. This practise worked, I saw the class react quickly try and act the same way to please the teacher and me as a student teacher. I feel that an effective teacher should have implemented a classroom routine and then to keep it consistent. An arrangement of getting things out and putting away can be made with children. All the children can be given a responsibility of taking care of a small area of the classroom. Places for resources, books etc should have a permanent place and be clearly labelled to enable the children to tidy up efficiently. I also noticed that the class teacher had seated the children in rows on specific places on the carpet. Bennet and Blunder (1983) found that children got more work done when sat in rows. I found that this is an effective classroom management strategy. There are no arguments of sitting next to friends or lack of space. The children know where they sit and with one glance, the teacher can see who is missing and spot ant disruptions. The children were seated on the table in groups according to ability. Independent work was often completed on the tables, however, the child were always given the chance to discuss ideas with each other before asking the teacher for help.

The Mental Health Issues Experienced By Nina - 1947 Words

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